Hi Tyler, this is Zana from the Summer Learning Journey. Your similes are great and I like how you compare animals to objects. Just remember that similes need to compare two things so for your last one you could make it maggots are as small as rice or maggots are as white as rice. It is also fun to write similes about your friends like Tyler is as cheeky as monkey. Keep up the good work! Ngā mihi nui, Zana Yates
Hi Tyler, this is Zana from the Summer Learning Journey. Your similes are great and I like how you compare animals to objects. Just remember that similes need to compare two things so for your last one you could make it maggots are as small as rice or maggots are as white as rice. It is also fun to write similes about your friends like Tyler is as cheeky as monkey. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteNgā mihi nui,
Zana Yates